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Open Question: need help with my stories? 10 points best answerer.? and more...

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Open Question: need help with my stories? 10 points best answerer.? and more...

Open Question: need help with my stories? 10 points best answerer.?

First, I want a shortened, forty worded, breif for each of the plots. secondly, An eight-worded theme for each This is the first plot: The setting is Albuquerque. Jessica Dixon is graduating from High school. She has the perfect life. Perfect boy friend, Perfect BFF and she is a pioneer planning to be a scientist. Her life is turned over when she breaks up with her boy friend, which happens to be the love of her life Clyde Bruno. Nine years pass, she still is a single. She is in a total depression which she lasts in for nine years and all her dream of being a scientist is stopped while she turns like best friends to the job, a kindergarten teacher. Clyde marries a lady called Amanda and they move to LA, giving birth to a child called Mike. For Jessica life became a boring routine. One day, Clyde and Amanda get divorced and so Clyde move back to the place he grew up in which he grew up, Albuquerque. Mike is now going to Kindergarten. Jessica's safe life turns up side down when Clyde's son is in her class and so with the start of the year they both start meeting with a strict parent/teacher relationship. Jessica still deeply loves him and he loves her but she keeps on putting her mind in front of her heart and so that's a problem. The relationship slowly gets less like a parent/teacher relationship and Clyde starts getting more flirtatious and so they kiss. Jessica gets depressed more by that. Where as all this is happening, their high school friends are doing all kinds of stuff to try to get them together including blind dates. After they kiss Jessica rejects giving him another chance and says that she doesn't want to have a relationship with him. She then tries to date others to forget him but it doesn't work. At the time Jessica is dating others, He is trying to hate her and forget her, unfortunately, and he can't. She start flirting with him on the parent's night, he doesn't talk to her and treat her just like a parent treats a teacher. In the end she tries to suicide he rescues her, they happily make up. This is the second plot: Dimitri Haskell is a Russian who lives in Italy. We track his story since he was young with his parent's divorce, his high school love and his life going on in an unhappy way, when Lissa his dearly loved girlfriend dies. He falls into a depression, his mother, who is now the editor of the squib magazine, pushes a girl towards him who would help him be away from the depression. She is called Beth, the ex-wife of a police-man called Jenks, A sexy lady. He had an affair with her and then she dumps him to go back to her ex. He falls into a deeper depression, his best friend then suggest him to go live for a while in a relaxing place called ((La Faviere)) in France. He goes there into the beautiful scenery and to his surprise he discovers that Jenks went there for relaxation too. They befriend each other and at last he tells him about his past too. The story mainly shows flash backs of lives of different people and how people could have different reactions. Beth then seeks revenge from Jenks for something in the past between them. Dimitri gets the job he always dreamt of, an author. He falls in love for a girl called Amber and Jenks fall for her sister. It isn't a totally happy ending because Dimitri's mother gets into an accident and so she dies. His father dies too committing suicide revealing that he always loved Mrs. Haskell although they got divorced. Jenks gets killed and at last Beth dies in prison giving birth to Jenks's son. Amber is sterile and so they adopt Beth's son. Life goes on

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Open Question: today is my wedding date actually...but i am not married still...?

that's because my mom and my would be had a fight, mom cancelled the marriage hall booking and everything all of sudden 20days ago, today is the day me and my would be have been in wedlock if she didn't did that cancellation. but this is not the present problem to me, i am doing meditation to keep my head strong, but i want my would be to be strong enough to fight over emotions,feelings, when i called him today he said he's very immensly depressed and upset over the marriage cancellation, he said he lamented about this issue in his heart, but i tried to make him divert, i talked to him and had a long conversation that this is not only the date fixed for marriage, we will have another date, he says this date was sentimental, i agree with that coz i did also lamented so much in my heart for what happend uptill now, but what i feel is there is no use of loosing emotions and still being sad, he said he planned to marry me making marriage attire all by himself in next year august, i am glad he made his decision, but what's the problem is, he is not really interested to talk with me, he's not letting me into his heart, i hope you understand, that doesn't mean he's keeping or avoiding me, it's like he's gently walking away from me, i had tried to be with him invisibly so many times, but he's not letting me into his heart, he's showing his feelings like he's fed up with me, he said a strange thing that i should cry and should not controll my feelings, so that my mom sees me crying, i asked him if he feels happy if i cry, he said here "i am all sad and down and your mom should not be happy, try to act like you are crying,lamenting before her, throw objects with rage on the floor etc" , i said i will do that for him even though he feels like he needs gap with me, even i asked him if he wanted to ignore me and avoid me, he said no i always need you. i said let's have a break and we'll talk after 3 days or 1 week, he said no to that too. i don't get it, does he really want me or don't want me to talk? i am just pissed off by this matter friends...what should i do? how should i go with him? should i talk or maintain some distance to him?should i wait for his call? if he makes call to me again how should i react?

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Open Question: He hates me and I did nothing wrong....how can I win him back?

There was a guy I was seeing earlier this year. After a couple of months, his ex-gf came back in the picture and he and I broke it off. But less than two months later, we were seeing each other again, on the side…all the while he was still with said girlfriend. About 2 months ago, he called me and explained that he couldn't see me any more, that things with them were working very well and he didn't want to jeopardize it. So we parted. I missed him, but I respected his decision and because I care for him, I only want him to be happy. A couple of week ago his girlfriend received some type of letter in the mail. I'm not sure the content but from what I've heard through one of our mutual friends, it was allegedly from me, telling dates and times I was with him and was supposedly had my signature on it. I did not send it and I have no clue where it would have come from. Now she's dumped him, he's all upset and thinks I sent it when I didn't. He told one of our mutual friends that I repulsed him. Hearing that made me physically ill. He is convinced I did this to him and will not consider any other possibilities. I did not nor would I ever do this to anyone, but I have absoulutely no idea who would have. There are only a few people who knew he and I were continuing to see each other on the side of his relationship, and NONE of them would ever do something like this to either of us. I've emailed him, telling him that I would never, EVER betray him that way and that none of my friends who knew about us would do that. He hasn't responded and it was sent well over a week ago. My friends tell me that when he calms down and begins to think logically again, that perhaps he will realize that I am not the type of woman to cause him problems like this. I am so torn up by this. He and I have been so very close over the last 8 months or so...and now for him to think I've done this is crushing me. He lives a couple of hours away so I cannot just swing by his place and say "we gotta talk!". I probably shouldn't care...but I love the man with all my heart.

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Open Question: Give me advise how can i trust again?

met a guy and we started dating.He was so nice and seemed so decent. He had a house, car(well not the best brand but...). He was paying almost all the time when we were doing shopping. He bought me diamond ring , and heart with key, roses a few times per day. He was treating me as a queen.He asked me to marry but i said its too early.He asked me if we could open bank account together but I refused. slowly i understood that he is in a huge debts and debts management, his house will be repossess and his car doesn't work and he need to pay £500 pounds to someone for the car. Then I realized he is actually in a big trouble and wanted to broke up with him. But somehow with a nice words and beautiful promises he managed to convinced me that he will work hard to repay his debts and he seemd to be very nice as a man.We moved in my house, i helped him to find a work ,bought him a decent clothes, paying for the food.He was only working nonstop.Suddenly he become changing started to insult me, to bully me, called me bi..ch and other nasty words. Every time when i asked him not to do something or to do something he became agressive and abusive. I have told him if he doesnt like to stay with me he knows where is the door and he could leave.The other day while I was at work he put his staff in my car and went to one of my ex collegues(female) and her bf crying and telling them lies that i put the stuff in my car and threw him on the street and he doesnt have where to go.When I back from work he told me that he is moving and untill I am not ready to compromise he wont come back. I told him to go and when he leave never to come back. He left and 2 hours later he started calling me and sending me texts that he is ready to come back.I strongly refused and told him its over. Next day in the morning the boyfriend of my ex collegues called me and asked me if i can go there and we all sit and resolve the problems. I refused and said everythin g is over.Since then that guy is spreading the lie that i kicked him out to all my ex collegues, managers ,ect.I want your honest oppininon how could i trust again?

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Open Question: Can someone gives me advise how can i trust again?

I met a guy and we started dating.He was so nice and seemed so decent. He had a house, car(well not the best brand but...). He was paying almost all the time when we were doing shopping. He bought me diamond ring , and heart with key, roses a few times per day. He was treating me as a queen.He asked me to marry but i said its too early.He asked me if we could open bank account together but I refused. slowly i understood that he is in a huge debts and debts management, his house will be repossess and his car doesn't work and he need to pay £500 pounds to someone for the car. Then I realized he is actually in a big trouble and wanted to broke up with him. But somehow with a nice words and beautiful promises he managed to convinced me that he will work hard to repay his debts and he seemd to be very nice as a man.We moved in my house, i helped him to find a work ,bought him a decent clothes, paying for the food.He was only working nonstop.Suddenly he become changing started to insult me, to bully me, called me bi..ch and other nasty words. Every time when i asked him not to do something or to do something he became agressive and abusive. I have told him if he doesnt like to stay with me he knows where is the door and he could leave.The other day while I was at work he put his staff in my car and went to one of my ex collegues(female) and her bf crying and telling them lies that i put the stuff in my car and threw him on the street and he doesnt have where to go.When I back from work he told me that he is moving and untill I am not ready to compromise he wont come back. I told him to go and when he leave never to come back. He left and 2 hours later he started calling me and sending me texts that he is ready to come back.I strongly refused and told him its over. Next day in the morning the boyfriend of my ex collegues called me and asked me if i can go there and we all sit and resolve the problems. I refused and said everythin g is over.Since then that guy is spreading the lie that i kicked him out to all my ex collegues, managers ,ect.I want your honest oppininon how could i trust again?

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Open Question: Can someone tells me how to gain back my trust to people?

I met a guy and we started dating.He was so nice and seemed so decent. He had a house, car(well not the best brand but...). He was paying almost all the time when we were doing shopping. He bought me diamond ring , and heart with key, roses a few times per day. He was treating me as a queen.He asked me to marry but i said its too early.He asked me if we could open bank account together but I refused. slowly i understood that he is in a huge debts and debts management, his house will be repossess and his car doesn't work and he need to pay £500 pounds to someone for the car. Then I realized he is actually in a big trouble and wanted to broke up with him. But somehow with a nice words and beautiful promises he managed to convinced me that he will work hard to repay his debts and he seemd to be very nice as a man.We moved in my house, i helped him to find a work ,bought him a decent clothes, paying for the food.He was only working nonstop.Suddenly he become changing started to insult me, to bully me, called me bi..ch and other nasty words. Every time when i asked him not to do something or to do something he became agressive and abusive. I have told him if he doesnt like to stay with me he knows where is the door and he could leave.The other day while I was at work he put his staff in my car and went to one of my ex collegues(female) and her bf crying and telling them lies that i put the stuff in my car and threw him on the street and he doesnt have where to go.When I back from work he told me that he is moving and untill I am not ready to compromise he wont come back. I told him to go and when he leave never to come back. He left and 2 hours later he started calling me and sending me texts that he is ready to come back.I strongly refused and told him its over. Next day in the morning the boyfriend of my ex collegues called me and asked me if i can go there and we all sit and resolve the problems. I refused and said everythin g is over.Since then that guy is spreading the lie that i kicked him out to all my ex collegues, managers ,ect.I want your honest oppininon how could i trust again?

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